Jianying Ji wrote on Sat, Jul 2, 2005 08:49 PM UTC:Good ★★★★
Very interesting game, and fairly modest too, which I like. I have a few
quick observations:
I. a-file and 8th rank is safe from the angels neither angel can jump
over them due to the edge on the left side.
II. By switching the demon and angel on the h-file with the knight on the
i-file their coverage is expanded so only the 8th rank becomes safe from
angel-fire, and the demons cover the whole board. Aethetically, you gain a
more symmetric setup. Moreover, with the white side holding the marginally
weaker angels, the first player advantage is probably canceled.
III. to make both side even more equal, you might consider making it 7 or
9 ranks (9 being my preference, a hint of dante) instead of 8, this way
there will be no safe zone from angel-fire
IV. to make a greater hommage to your inspiration you might make the game
byzantine by joining the left and right sides of the board.
hopefully you find my comment interesting and perhaps useful...