Ben Reiniger wrote on Wed, Nov 30, 2011 09:54 PM UTC:
The main distraction for me as far as layout is the bulleting. Using html bulleting would be considerably more readable. Also the headers would be a bit nicer in the cv standard format, and I agree that the long spaces after diagrams is irksome; I don't know why a red line would come about when deleting that space...
I haven't really read through the entire thing, but I find the snippets I have read to be fine text-wise. (I understand renaming standard pieces for thematic/historical purposes; however, I too find it harder to read the result.)