Ben Reiniger wrote on Mon, Sep 18, 2023 09:37 PM UTC:
I read this a while back, wasn't clear on the rules, but never commented to ask. Going over it again, I can't bring myself to try to figure it all out. While part of that is me being tired, I think another part of it will affect other readers. Please try to simplify the presentation of the rules, and reduce the use of all-caps. Possibly a shorter word than "superimposed", and ones that are more varied than "superimposed on" and "superimposed upon" would also help.
I read this a while back, wasn't clear on the rules, but never commented to ask. Going over it again, I can't bring myself to try to figure it all out. While part of that is me being tired, I think another part of it will affect other readers. Please try to simplify the presentation of the rules, and reduce the use of all-caps. Possibly a shorter word than "superimposed", and ones that are more varied than "superimposed on" and "superimposed upon" would also help.